My biography
My name is Carlos, I have 16 years, my parents are Juan y Pilar, I have 1 brother, he have 19 years I was born on september 4 of 2000 in Medellín, . When I was 2 years we move to Bogotá. When I arrived to Bogotá I began studies at the 3 years in Burbujitas de papel. In the children's day one cousin would give us a dog but when we went for the dog he had given it to a friend, my brother and me began to cry and my parents buy a schnauzer. This dog was the only gray and the most beautiful and we took the dog to the house, but it was very sick, my mom took the dog to the veterinarian and it go to the house after 1 week. My father call it Oscar, it's very important and especial for me.When I was 5 years I enter study to Corazonista, I played hockey in a academy, when I was more higher I began play soccer, but in this school the academy is so hard, the teachers are very closer I have to give up in the soccer because in this moment I had a lot of homeworks. In 7th grade I lose the year and it was so difficult because most of my friends had left the school but I make friends and I met with more people, in 8th grade I was very bad at school and in middle of the year I changed of school, I went to GSA.
It was so difficult for me because I never have change of school I have been 10 years in Corazonista and I don´t knew the people but it was very easy, the people was very friendly.
The most important people for me are my family and my really close friends.
It was so difficult for me because I never have change of school I have been 10 years in Corazonista and I don´t knew the people but it was very easy, the people was very friendly.
The most important people for me are my family and my really close friends.
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